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Somewhere...
Behind every breathing moment of mine
I brood to the notion of an ecstatic catharsis that has escaped me for ages now
And I dream of the alignment of three points
Where luminescence, darkness, and my soul bind
Please, make me whole again
©2002-2009 ~bluenine
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Yet again, I've gone a long time without writing poetry. This is about my perpetual incontentedness and the lack of balance in my life. I want to be alright again, but it may take me a lifetime.

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:icondaishi:
short... but expressive... nice work

:iconlowra:
I don't think you know how much I love this poem. It breathes hope. It breathes reparation. I just love how it breathes. Extremely impressive and intelligent. The title fits perfectly with the content. Write more often, PLEASE!
Wuvoo...
:iconkittenish:
:/

alex, i haven't really been reading or writing poetry for a while now. right now i can barely read poetry, i'm just so exhausted.... but i tried to read this, and i liked what i managed to get, even in my exhausted state.

rachel
oi to the punks Unimpressed , oi to the skins Disbelief , oi to the world and everybody wins Nod .
:iconlost-dreams:
Where luminescence, darkness, and my soul bind
so beautiful... so very clean, and perfect. you have beautiful style. i agree with lowra 120%!
::woody

[nows wheres that LOVE deviation vote...]
:iconfr0zen:
your work is always very expressive. i love it.

___________________ __ _
dont open your eyes,
you will not like what you see.

http://www.frozenweb.org

alles ist nichts.
:iconcottser:
Great poem, to me this sorta symbolizes your rediscovered catharsis in poetry.

Cottser
http://www.cottser.com
:iconsanguru:
like dai said, it's short and expressive. i really like it, you should write more.
:iconmusicinmyhead:
wow, i like that powerful message that's conveyed, and the words you used are so awesome :) (Smile) great choice of a title too, really brings out this poem :) (Smile) awesome work man, keep it up :D (Big Grin)

Music
:iconmygrane:
oh wow. the fourth and fifth lines make this poem for me... just amazing what so few words can stir up inside...

-mygrane

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